tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3991802457623802006.post6375267032051758184..comments2023-03-24T07:44:50.125-04:00Comments on The Business of Words: Five O'clock (a revision of Bravery)Ambition Birdhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12919490089348223647noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3991802457623802006.post-21714759051592807742009-04-28T22:56:00.000-04:002009-04-28T22:56:00.000-04:00i like this much better. the middle stanza reads a...i like this much better. the middle stanza reads a little awkward, but i like the idea behind it.nckhrkmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02658662227432637842noreply@blogger.com